Showing posts with label writing. Show all posts
Showing posts with label writing. Show all posts

Friday, 8 November 2019

Limericks

Limericks
This week in literacy we have been looking at limericks. A limerick is a 5 lined rhyming poem. The first and second line have to rhyme, then the third and fourth line have to rhyme. The final line has to rhyme with the first and second line. I found this activity pretty easy. I did find it a little bit difficult to make up my own poem though. Here is my google drawing about limericks.

Friday, 31 May 2019

Myths

The past three weeks in T1 we have been reading and writing myths. We had to base our myths on a natural phenomenon. I based mine on rock slides. Here is my writing.

Friday, 16 November 2018

Week 5 Blog Post

This week in T3 we have been working on our country studies! Since I moved to this last week I got to choose what country I wanted to study. I chose South Korea because I find their culture very interesting. I'm still working on my presentation so hopefully I will be able to post it next week. We need to find the answers to 10 questions about our countries (flag meaning, money). South Korea is a part of east Asia and has one of the most heavy guarded boarders in the world (North and South Korea boarder) For more interesting facts check out my next blog post coming soon. 

Friday, 30 June 2017

Literacy Reflection T2W9

Writing
This week for writing we have been doing speeches! I LOVE SPEECHES!! I am doing my speech on the school production (which I am in). I won't share my speech with you though because that will spoil it for my class.

Reading
This week for reading Group 2 (my group) have read Mrs Wildings Potatoes. This book is about a old lady called Mrs Wilding who has a great garden. She asked the boys to help her with a bag of compost. But the boys were in a hurry to meet a new all black. They helped Mrs Wilding but Corban (the all black) had all ready arrived. He answered  questions but did not sign balls. The boys were bummed out that the old lady held them up. Read the journal to find out what happens next!

Word work
Since we have been doing speeches this week we were working on strong words. Strong Words are words that make your writing better. We picked 8 words to use in out speech and we had to find out the meanings of them. Here is my work!

Friday, 16 June 2017

Literacy Reflection T2W7

Writing
This week for writing we wrote a description about Miss Reissmann our NEW teacher! I think I could add in more F.A.N.B.O.Y.S. and Conjunctions. I loved doing this task and next week we are describing a family member so I'm going to do my Granddad. So here it is! All so comment who you would describe!! 


Reading
This week for reading we have done a book summary about the book Leave. I liked this book because it was really Sweet. I could add in more words next time. Here it is!


Friday, 4 November 2016

Writing Reflection T4 W4

This week for writing we had to make a mythical creature. I made a Hobaloba it is a dragon. My next step is to put in more detail. I learnt how to draw a dragon as well.


Friday, 21 October 2016

Writing reflection T4 W1

This week for writing we were fixing up our expiation about a special place for my family.
There was nothing I needed to fix up. I found this challenging. Here it is.

Friday, 14 October 2016

Writing Reflection T4 W1

This week for writing we had to write a explanation. I wrote mine about why we have viruses. It included a thing about RNA and my teacher did not know what RNA was. My next step is to make it more detailed. Here is my work. Why are there Viruses 


Friday, 2 September 2016

Literacy Reflection T3 W6

This week for literacy we have done writing and reading. For reading I had to read a book called Wild Life. Then we had to describe the setting, plot, characters, problem, resolution and genre. I found this a little bit hard because I had heaps of other follow ups to do by Friday. My next step is to get more done. 
For writing we had to write a introduction to our house hold machine. We had to pick a thing in our house then write a introduction about it. I found this hard to do because I had trouble trying to pick a thing to write about. My next step is to add more detail.

Toaster
A toaster is a machine that heat up some foods. Most people use the toaster for breakfast to make toast. Which is bread that is kind of cooked.

A toaster looks like a big square with two thick cuts in it. They can come in all shapes, colors and sizes. Some are red some are white. The lever on it is like a big oval. There are four buttons on the top which control how it cooks like if it is a crumpet it will cook in differently to how it cooks bread. There is a little twisty dial that controls how long the bread stays in the toaster. There is a button you can use to pop you're toast up.

Monday, 15 August 2016

Reflection Week 3 Term 3- Topic and Literacy

Olympics : This week we have been studying the 2016 Rio Olympics.  We have learnt about the old and new Olympics, we had to compare the new and old Olympics. We learnt about the Para Olympians.  I did not like that we had to study so much. I found it hard to find a person to do. We also had to study an inspirational story I chose Nadia because she did amazing gymnastics. Here is my work.






 

Friday, 1 July 2016

Week 9 Reflection

Numeracy- WALT:To complete and show how much it costs to own a dog. This week for numeracy we have had to find out how much it is to own a dog. The dog that we chose was a french poodle. Here is my work. 
PrEP- This week and last week we had this thing called PrEP, It is when we make stuff and sell it for Kawa or what the name is. We started of doing our C Vs, then we had to apply for a job and venture, then we had to look at what job we got, then we have had to order the stuff we need, then we had to make a plan, then we had to make the product, then we had to make heaps of the product, then we had to sell. We managed to get some photos. Last week we had little market, on Thursday this week we had big market, here is a photo of me and all the things I bought. Just saying we sold heaps.Here is the link to our PrEP site.

Literacy - This week for literacy we have started to practice our speeches for class. We have started our bubbl.us and put all our ideas in to it here is my bubble us.

Topic - This week for topic we have had the high school come in and make games for us online. Sorry I do not have a photos of this event. It was fun and we had this game and I kept on hitting the walls and starting over and over again.

Friday, 24 June 2016

Week 8 Reflection

Word work
WALT: silly sentences. This week for word work I have done silly sentences. I found it easy because I know all the words.

Writing 
WALT to show when to start a new paragraph. This week for writing I have been looking at  ways to start a paragraph. (Change of person, time and place) I found this easy. Here is my work.


Numeracy 
WALT to show what we have learn about decimals. This week for numeracy we have used Khan Academy and have been learning about decimals. Here is my work.


Reading 
WALT to show what some punctuation is. This week for reading we have been earning about what some types punctuation means (:"?;',.)

Friday, 17 June 2016

Week 7 reflection

Numeracy -  W.A.L.T: To work out fraction problems. This week for numeracy we have been working on Khan Academy and studdy ladder to work out fraction problems. I found this hard to understand what the question meant here is my work on Khan Academy and Studdy ladder. I have also worked some of it out in my maths book





Writing - WALT show not tell. This week for writing we have made a screencastify of us describing a emotion but we could not use words like happy, sad, scared and angry. I found this east to do.


Reading - WALT: to find out how punctuation makes a big difference. This week we have had to look at this sentence and find out why it sounds different. I found this easy. My next step is to use harder sentences.

Word work -  WALT to make silly sentences. This week we have made silly sentences. I found this easy. My next step is to use harder words.

Friday, 10 June 2016

Week 6 Reflection

This week we have discovered this amazing web site  called thing link. Here is my work. I have added all the links for my work on the image. You can see all my work

Friday, 3 June 2016

Week 5 Reflection

Reading - WALT: Highlight 6-10 words and use a thesaurus to find new/exciting/extending words to use. This week for reading we have had to look at our writing and look for boring words and replace them with better words. I found this easy because we had to use a thesaurus to find the words. My next step would be to extend what type of words I use. Here is my work. 



Early on a frosty morning, Lurvey the farm helper discovers a web in Mr Zuckerman's barn with the words some pig Spun into a web that Charlotte the web spinning spider spun overnight.


Mr Zuckerman was quite shocked when he saw this creation. Charlotte was                                                                                                                                more than an ordinary spider she was a talented spider unlike most spiders.
Mr Zuckerman is the best farmer in the whole country. Lurvey the farm helper was blown away when he saw that one spider made this amazing web. Wilbur was happy that the plan worked. Charlotte was filled with joy that the others liked her creation.


Charlotte the spider spun this extraordinary web made from her finest silk just to keep poor Wilbur from death. I would've done the same if I was a spider living in a barn. Poor Wilbur must've been scared.


Happy=delighted
scared= fearful
death= eternal rest
Frosty= antarctic
country= out land
Morning = dawn

Barnyard Times




Volume I: Issue VII News from the Zuckerman's Farm




The best pig .               
Early on a crisp and frosty morning, Lurvey the worker on Mr Zuckerman's farm discovers a web in the pig pen,  with the words “some pig “woven into the web that Charlotte the web spinning spider spun overnight.

Mr Zuckerman was quite shocked when he saw this creation. Charlotte was more than an ordinary spider she was a talented spider unlike most spiders.
Image result for Charlottes web
Mr Zuckerman is the best farmer in the whole country. Lurvey the farm helper was blown away when he saw that one spider made this amazing web. Wilbur was happy that the plan worked. Charlotte was filled with joy that the others liked her creation.

Charlotte the spider spun this extraordinary web made from her finest silk just to keep poor Wilbur from death. I bet Mr Zuckerman would've done the same if he was a spider living in a barn. Poor Wilbur must've been terrified that the plan might not work

By Megan Bentley

The best pig .               
6 am Early on a crisp and frosty morning, Luvey is a worker on Mr Zuckerman's farm best the farm helper in the country discovers a web in Mr Zuckerman's big red barn west of America, with the words some pig woven into the web that Charlotte the extraordinary web spinning spider spun on a cold and crisp night.


Mr Zuckerman was quite shocked when he saw this creation. Charlotte was                                                     more than an ordinary spider she was a talented spider unlike most spiders.
Mr Zuckerman is the best farmer in the whole country. Luvey the farm helper was blown away when he saw that one spider made this amazing web. Wilbur was happy that the plan worked. Charlotte was filled with joy that the others liked her creation.


Charlotte the spider spun this extraordinary web made from her finest silk just to keep poor Wilbur from death. I bet Mr Zuckerman would've done the same if he was a spider living in a barn. Poor Wilbur must've been terrified that the plan might not work

Numeracy - This week for numeracy I had to work with a buddy and take a look at each others screencastify and rate out of five with faces. I found this easy because we mainly just had to have a look at the screencastify at rate it. Here is my work.



Word work- This is my spelling for this term. I found this easy because the words that the teachers are to easy for me. My next step will be to look a harder for me.