Reading - WALT: Highlight 6-10 words and use a thesaurus to find new/exciting/extending words to use. This week for reading we have had to look at our writing and look for boring words and replace them with better words. I found this easy because we had to use a thesaurus to find the words. My next step would be to extend what type of words I use. Here is my work.
Early on a frosty morning, Lurvey the farm helper discovers a web in Mr Zuckerman's barn with the words some pig Spun into a web that Charlotte the web spinning spider spun overnight.
Mr Zuckerman was quite shocked when he saw this creation. Charlotte was more than an ordinary spider she was a talented spider unlike most spiders.
Mr Zuckerman is the best farmer in the whole country. Lurvey the farm helper was blown away when he saw that one spider made this amazing web. Wilbur was happy that the plan worked. Charlotte was filled with joy that the others liked her creation.
Charlotte the spider spun this extraordinary web made from her finest silk just to keep poor Wilbur from death. I would've done the same if I was a spider living in a barn. Poor Wilbur must've been scared.
Happy=delighted
scared= fearful
death= eternal rest
Frosty= antarctic
country= out land
Morning = dawn
Barnyard Times
Volume I: Issue VII News from the Zuckerman's Farm
The best pig .
Early on a crisp and frosty morning, Lurvey the worker on Mr Zuckerman's farm discovers a web in the pig pen, with the words “some pig “woven into the web that Charlotte the web spinning spider spun overnight.
Mr Zuckerman was quite shocked when he saw this creation. Charlotte was more than an ordinary spider she was a talented spider unlike most spiders.
Mr Zuckerman is the best farmer in the whole country. Lurvey the farm helper was blown away when he saw that one spider made this amazing web. Wilbur was happy that the plan worked. Charlotte was filled with joy that the others liked her creation.
Charlotte the spider spun this extraordinary web made from her finest silk just to keep poor Wilbur from death. I bet Mr Zuckerman would've done the same if he was a spider living in a barn. Poor Wilbur must've been terrified that the plan might not work
By Megan Bentley
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The best pig .
6 am Early on a crisp and frosty morning, Luvey is a worker on Mr Zuckerman's farm best the farm helper in the country discovers a web in Mr Zuckerman's big red barn west of America, with the words some pig woven into the web that Charlotte the extraordinary web spinning spider spun on a cold and crisp night.
Mr Zuckerman was quite shocked when he saw this creation. Charlotte was more than an ordinary spider she was a talented spider unlike most spiders.
Mr Zuckerman is the best farmer in the whole country. Luvey the farm helper was blown away when he saw that one spider made this amazing web. Wilbur was happy that the plan worked. Charlotte was filled with joy that the others liked her creation.
Charlotte the spider spun this extraordinary web made from her finest silk just to keep poor Wilbur from death. I bet Mr Zuckerman would've done the same if he was a spider living in a barn. Poor Wilbur must've been terrified that the plan might not work
Numeracy - This week for numeracy I had to work with a buddy and take a look at each others screencastify and rate out of five with faces. I found this easy because we mainly just had to have a look at the screencastify at rate it. Here is my work.
Word work- This is my spelling for this term. I found this easy because the words that the teachers are to easy for me. My next step will be to look a harder for me.
