Friday 4 November 2016

Writing Reflection T4 W4

This week for writing we had to make a mythical creature. I made a Hobaloba it is a dragon. My next step is to put in more detail. I learnt how to draw a dragon as well.


7 comments:

  1. Kia Ora Megan it's Adi and I really like your hobaloba it is very creative and it is really cute. I think it needs a little bit more detail to the drawing but it is really good anyway. How long did it take you to draw?
    poroporoaki (bye)

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  2. Kia Ora Megan it's Llewellyn. Nice hobaloba I really think in is weird. How long did it tack to make the hobalobe? I fond the hobaloba very interesting and weird. This reminds me of an oompa loompa. you need a lot more detail in the drowning. Poroporoaki (bye)

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  3. Kia Ora Megan! It's Lara here from Mamaku 3 I really like your mythical creature it is very interesting. This remind me of when I did my mythical creature.
    What do you like about your mythical creature?
    Ka pai Megan!

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  4. Kia Ora Megan it's Jacob and I like your Hobaloba it is creative and it is weard as well. I think you need to put some more detail in the writing it is great anyway. How long did it take you to draw?
    poroporoaki (bye)

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  5. Kia ora Megan it's Katelin Wow done I really like your Hobaloba what other creature would you draw?I would Draw a Dragon because I drawn a unicorn the first time. Kai Pai (Good work) From Katelin.

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  6. Kia Ora Megan! It's Kaleb S here from Mamaku 2 I really like your mythical creature it is very interesting. This remind me of when I did my mythical creature.
    What do you like about your mythical creature?
    Ka pai Megan!

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  7. Kia Ora Megan
    It's Richard here. I really like your Hobaloba it looks cool.
    Maybe you could put more information on the creature. What would you do for an our creature?
    Na Richard

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