Monday 18 November 2019

participating and contributing


This week we have been looking at Participating and contributing. Here is my drawing



3 comments:

  1. Hello Megan
    My name is Hazel,I'm a year 8 from Pt egnland School.

    what I like about your post is how you adding a nice picture.And telling your readers about your contribute and participate.

    Next time you could add some more writing so your readers will understand your writing more better.It's like a summary.

    Keep it up megan

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  2. Hi Megan. I'm Mikael from Yaldhurst school. I like how you have made it look really cool. And it is also really colorful. Next time I think you should try to explain what you have been doing a little bit more. Apart from that I think it is really cool.

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  3. Hi Megan.
    I am Albin from Yaldhurst.
    I liked your blog.
    It was amazing.
    It would have been better if you had added some more description and images.
    Your drawing was also amazing.
    I liked it.
    Kind regards
    Albin.

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Thank-you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comment.