The past three weeks in T1 we have been reading and writing myths. We had to base our myths on a natural phenomenon. I based mine on rock slides. Here is my writing.
Kia ora Megan, my name is jedi and I am a year eight in rimu class. Did you write this by yourself? Because it is fantastic! You have summed up the myth/story excellently. And I actually found it very interesting to read. So correct me if I am wrong, you made up this myth yourself? And if so, then did you mean to tell it as a narrative? Or like a report?
Hey there Megan, my name is Parwin and I am a year 8 from Yaldhurst Model school. I think that the myth of the mountains and Aoraki was really cool and I enjoyed reading it. I liked that you have added information in your writing telling us why you did it. I think that the way you presented was sort of dull although the writing itself was amazing, don't get me wrong but I think you should have like presented your writing in a more creative way. I haven't done something like this but hopefully we would because I thin that this type of writing is really cool and fun to write. Like Jedi had previously asked, is this a narrative or a report? Awesome work!
Hi Meghan My name is Laolao from point england school in auckland I really loved that you posted this myth on your blog because it is a really cool and sad story. Keep on the good work.
Hi Meghan My name is Delilah from Yaldhurst model shoolschool in auckland I really loved that you posted this myth on your blog because it is a really cool and sad story. Keep on the good work kid rigards Delilah ◕‿‿◕
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ReplyDeleteKia ora Megan, my name is jedi and I am a year eight in rimu class. Did you write this by yourself? Because it is fantastic! You have summed up the myth/story excellently. And I actually found it very interesting to read. So correct me if I am wrong, you made up this myth yourself? And if so, then did you mean to tell it as a narrative? Or like a report?
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Jedi≧◡≦
Hey there Megan, my name is Parwin and I am a year 8 from Yaldhurst Model school. I think that the myth of the mountains and Aoraki was really cool and I enjoyed reading it. I liked that you have added information in your writing telling us why you did it. I think that the way you presented was sort of dull although the writing itself was amazing, don't get me wrong but I think you should have like presented your writing in a more creative way. I haven't done something like this but hopefully we would because I thin that this type of writing is really cool and fun to write. Like Jedi had previously asked, is this a narrative or a report? Awesome work!
ReplyDeleteLooking forward to your next posts,
Parwin
Hi Meghan
ReplyDeleteMy name is Laolao from point england school in auckland I really loved that you posted this myth on your blog because it is a really cool and sad story. Keep on the good work.
Hi Meghan
ReplyDeleteMy name is Delilah from Yaldhurst model shoolschool in auckland I really loved that you posted this myth on your blog because it is a really cool and sad story. Keep on the good work
kid rigards Delilah ◕‿‿◕